i love this so much so far! only question i have is will we be able to choose our name in the final game? my laptop is under my deadname and it caught me off guard to see it all of a sudden lol! cant wait for the final version!
Say MC like you are so trusting you with this like a druggie like you like this man drug you everybody up there in that club knew what was gonna happen maybe they already know the drill you didn’t got drugged if he brings my drink, I would at least smell it first because I don’t know about you, but I always check my drinks
I appreciate being able to choose the pronouns but I've noticed that you are referred to with female pronouns no matter what you pick? its a little off-putting but not a big deal I guess
I love each and every feature found in this game! From the interface to the sprites and the background art. I also love the way you write about the feelings of the MC, and the details found in the way they describe their surroundings. Can't wait for an update!
I was trying to join your patreon but i keep being told that "You can't join this creator's membership". I am able to join other patreons just fine (I tested it) but I cannot join yours for some reason. Is this patreon paused or something, or am I doing something wrong? I really liked the demo by the way!
Yes, our patreon is currently paused. It should be back up and running within the next couple of months. Thank you for wanting to support is though! It means a lot. 😁
The plot seems interesting but the MC is infuriatingly dumb in the demo. I'm sure they'll be smarter in the full game (or maybe hope? idk) but the whole thing with the choker was the most obvious thing in the world.
One huge problem though: The pronouns are always female, which made me very confused at first and then very uncomfortable since I'm a man and picked the male option. I also picked the non-binary option afterwards, to see if the pronouns were still female with that one and they were. You should definitely fix that if you want to not make every non-female player extremely uncomfortable when trying the demo.
I like this game so much, it is amazing but the one problem I did end up having was having she/her pronouns on me when im a male and chose he/him but I love this game so much its amazing keep the good work up!!
I love this game and I really wanted to know what happens after the demo, but I can't support you on Patreon anytime soon despite wanting so much, because you deserve it, this game is amazing!
So I wanted to ask you if in the future the download will be free for everyone or it will always be only through Patreon to play it? (Please, please, please say yes, even if it takes 20 years, I really want to play Zane's route he's so nghhh)
Regarding your question, unfortunately the early access chapters will remain behind the Patreon wall until the full game is released, and then will of course be accessible through purchasing the game itself. :( Sorry to disappoint!
"She has been taken care of.." "Wha!?!" sorry that part of the dialoge had me laughing my ass off for some reason. Good work! Though I think the MC could stand to be more worried about the whole choker scenario. :)
Honestly, loved the game at first but I'll admit it's a little convoluted.
I found myself growing agitated with the protag during the "gift" and "necklace" chapters because of how obvious the answer was as to who the choker was from, and how seemingly calm she was with the circumstance of the gift, even after it got stuck on her neck. I realize the whole point is to build suspense because of the yandere plotline but it does get a little bit annoying when, instead of suspense, it's more of the protag deliberately going out of their way to ignore everything that has been laid out in front of them. This isn't really a plot error and more of something that could be fixed by rewriting the script a little. (It is only the demo after all, and I'm not some sort of videogame programming master. Just something I thought of while playing.)
It is a good game that I did enjoy as a standalone but it could use some work, as the protag seemed more of an already written character without a name instead of an immersive character for the player, and really was so obliviously dumb it became infuriating. It is a demo and I understand it won't be perfect -even as an official release- but it seemed like it was trying to fit everything it could into just a couple chapters. The game is described as a yandere dating sim, but up until the last chapter it felt more like "stereotypical YA novel MC is pursued by a slightly creepy rich man."
It also really took me out of it to find out the protag was a stereotypical thin light skinned blonde girl with straight hair. I'm assuming she's a self-insert of the dev, which isn't really wrong in anyway, but if you're making any changes to the chapters in the official release it'd be a lot more immersive for a lot of players for there not to be a canon appearance for the protag.
Thanks for your valuable feedback! You're not the only one to have a complaint about the demo's writing, and all i can say is that yes, this is a demo, and the full version of the game will be different. This was just to get started 😊
As fas as the CG at the end, that is an out of date image. In the full version and in the gender-neutral demo, there is nothing to physically identify the player (you will even be able to choose your pronouns at the beginning!)
I hope that if you stick around fof the full game you won't be disappointed!
Of course and thank you! I didn't mean anything to sound patronizing or negative, just my thoughts. I'm sure the official release will be awesome because I really did enjoy the demo overall!
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Is this game still in dev? ;w; <3
AAAAAAAH !!! It was so good !!! I need the next chapterrrrr !! No. I need the full game !!! so good !! Can't wait !!
I can't stop thinking about his misplaced mouth at the end scene :'( please fix it, nice lil game btw
This game is vary cool^^ and its lovely to meet other horrible scumbag man enjoyers
i love this so much so far! only question i have is will we be able to choose our name in the final game? my laptop is under my deadname and it caught me off guard to see it all of a sudden lol! cant wait for the final version!
Say MC like you are so trusting you with this like a druggie like you like this man drug you everybody up there in that club knew what was gonna happen maybe they already know the drill you didn’t got drugged if he brings my drink, I would at least smell it first because I don’t know about you, but I always check my drinks
God damn the Mcs in these kinds stories are always too trusting.
Though the game is pretty interesting, can't wait for more!
the game is interesting but why the russian language does not work?
Unfortunately, the Russian translation hasn't been completed yet and isn't available yet.
I appreciate being able to choose the pronouns but I've noticed that you are referred to with female pronouns no matter what you pick? its a little off-putting but not a big deal I guess
We're still working on fixing this! I'm sorry for the inconvenience 😔
I love each and every feature found in this game! From the interface to the sprites and the background art. I also love the way you write about the feelings of the MC, and the details found in the way they describe their surroundings. Can't wait for an update!
Can you choose the gender of the MC? (or is MC a guy?)
Hi! You should be able to choose your gender at the beginning of the game :)
Hi!
I was trying to join your patreon but i keep being told that "You can't join this creator's membership". I am able to join other patreons just fine (I tested it) but I cannot join yours for some reason. Is this patreon paused or something, or am I doing something wrong? I really liked the demo by the way!
Hi!
Yes, our patreon is currently paused. It should be back up and running within the next couple of months. Thank you for wanting to support is though! It means a lot. 😁
Ok! thanks for letting me know :)
The plot seems interesting but the MC is infuriatingly dumb in the demo. I'm sure they'll be smarter in the full game (or maybe hope? idk) but the whole thing with the choker was the most obvious thing in the world.
One huge problem though: The pronouns are always female, which made me very confused at first and then very uncomfortable since I'm a man and picked the male option. I also picked the non-binary option afterwards, to see if the pronouns were still female with that one and they were. You should definitely fix that if you want to not make every non-female player extremely uncomfortable when trying the demo.
We will get this fixed right away! Thank you for letting us know.
I like this game so much, it is amazing but the one problem I did end up having was having she/her pronouns on me when im a male and chose he/him but I love this game so much its amazing keep the good work up!!
I'm so sorry to hear that! We'll be fixing that right away.
You are amazing!! Thank you, and thank you for your hard work on this game!
The art for this game is stunning, i'm so excited for the full game release!
I love this game and I really wanted to know what happens after the demo, but I can't support you on Patreon anytime soon despite wanting so much, because you deserve it, this game is amazing!
So I wanted to ask you if in the future the download will be free for everyone or it will always be only through Patreon to play it?
(Please, please, please say yes, even if it takes 20 years, I really want to play Zane's route he's so nghhh)Anyway, thanks in advance ❤️
Hello!
I'm glad you like the game so much! :D
Regarding your question, unfortunately the early access chapters will remain behind the Patreon wall until the full game is released, and then will of course be accessible through purchasing the game itself. :( Sorry to disappoint!
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"She has been taken care of.." "Wha!?!" sorry that part of the dialoge had me laughing my ass off for some reason. Good work! Though I think the MC could stand to be more worried about the whole choker scenario. :)
lol Yes, that was definitely a bit cliche! But it fit so well, too1
And yes, we're changing some things to make her a little more realistic and not so... well, naive.
Thank you for your feedback!
-ataraxic
Thank you! We're working very hard to get it out in full!
-ataraxic
Honestly, loved the game at first but I'll admit it's a little convoluted.
I found myself growing agitated with the protag during the "gift" and "necklace" chapters because of how obvious the answer was as to who the choker was from, and how seemingly calm she was with the circumstance of the gift, even after it got stuck on her neck. I realize the whole point is to build suspense because of the yandere plotline but it does get a little bit annoying when, instead of suspense, it's more of the protag deliberately going out of their way to ignore everything that has been laid out in front of them. This isn't really a plot error and more of something that could be fixed by rewriting the script a little. (It is only the demo after all, and I'm not some sort of videogame programming master. Just something I thought of while playing.)
It is a good game that I did enjoy as a standalone but it could use some work, as the protag seemed more of an already written character without a name instead of an immersive character for the player, and really was so obliviously dumb it became infuriating. It is a demo and I understand it won't be perfect -even as an official release- but it seemed like it was trying to fit everything it could into just a couple chapters. The game is described as a yandere dating sim, but up until the last chapter it felt more like "stereotypical YA novel MC is pursued by a slightly creepy rich man."
It also really took me out of it to find out the protag was a stereotypical thin light skinned blonde girl with straight hair. I'm assuming she's a self-insert of the dev, which isn't really wrong in anyway, but if you're making any changes to the chapters in the official release it'd be a lot more immersive for a lot of players for there not to be a canon appearance for the protag.
Hi!
Thanks for your valuable feedback! You're not the only one to have a complaint about the demo's writing, and all i can say is that yes, this is a demo, and the full version of the game will be different. This was just to get started 😊
As fas as the CG at the end, that is an out of date image. In the full version and in the gender-neutral demo, there is nothing to physically identify the player (you will even be able to choose your pronouns at the beginning!)
I hope that if you stick around fof the full game you won't be disappointed!
-ataraxic
Of course and thank you! I didn't mean anything to sound patronizing or negative, just my thoughts. I'm sure the official release will be awesome because I really did enjoy the demo overall!
Of course!